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I had a dream
Early that Sunday
Fell through the sky and down
Into my eyes
I had a vision
I wasn't in it
But I was in it
As it fell down on me
And forty people
Four thousand people
Four million people
Had it come down on them
And we were swept away
And we were carried forth
Our lives forgotten
Our homes remembered
I had a dream
Early that Sunday
Rose through the sky and up
Into heaven
Early that Sunday
Fell through the sky and down
Into my eyes
I had a vision
I wasn't in it
But I was in it
As it fell down on me
And forty people
Four thousand people
Four million people
Had it come down on them
And we were swept away
And we were carried forth
Our lives forgotten
Our homes remembered
I had a dream
Early that Sunday
Rose through the sky and up
Into heaven
That's all, for words.
© 2007 - 2024 Jandalf
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Meh, you never tell me when you post stuff. But that's okay, you'd have to be an amazing poet for me to fav. Funny, isn't it--I think you've faved every single poem I've done and on the flip side, I fav most of your art art. I just don't like poems much. It's a GOOD poem, just I have to be seriously in awe to bother faving one. Tend to go for rereadability value. Like YouTube stuffs! Zomg. Oh yeah. YouTube. Right.
I'm all like, brains right now. And ranty. (flails and falls over) We both need to do more aaaart. Since we didn't before. You know.
I think you'd probably get more notice if you only posted poems because they're pretty good stuff. I don't think there's any hope of me getting notice. x_o
I'm all like, brains right now. And ranty. (flails and falls over) We both need to do more aaaart. Since we didn't before. You know.
I think you'd probably get more notice if you only posted poems because they're pretty good stuff. I don't think there's any hope of me getting notice. x_o